I was born in Saigon, VN then moved to MN, U.S on Feb. 5th, 2014.
I'm out going person but don't know exactly the way to make friends, my friendship just begin naturally.
I'm improving my English by going to ABE school, I'm so glad that I can find the suitable place for my English level; I'm also so excited about English and Social Studies classes. Although at first I had little worried about catching up with other classmate, I have more confidence right now.
I love art, actually, I love everything beauty so I want everything is perfect in my view.
I love spicy food. This is the hardest thing I have to adapt when I came to US. I'm used to eat everything with tone of chilly sauce which hardly find here.
Dark chocolate and Oreo are two sweet snacks which I've never deny.
Vanessa-
ReplyDeleteGreat job you are the only person that incorporated live video into you story! This will entertain you viewing audience at a very high level. Your transitions were well place and kept me guessing as to what I would see next! Make sure in the future that you preview your final video. I would have liked to have a longer look at some of you images but you cut away too quickly. Also, make sure you allow time for someone to proofread you writing. Very well done, keep up the hard work!
I love the way that you used videos to it, the one thing that i didnt like about it was that it was short
ReplyDeleteI loved your theme and how you showed videos. You could have zoomed out on a few pictures to show the whole image.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you have videos inside your videos. Proof read some of the words.
ReplyDeleteYour drawing was great. One of the photos went to fast for me to see. But i really liked how you put real video in the Imovie.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you put the video clips in your video! It was cool to see pictures from where you're from. The only thing I would say to fix is show your pictures longer! Good job!!
ReplyDeleteVanessa, I loved the video. Just remember to proofread. Great job!
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